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Maria through the wormhole by ExplositionRooster5 Maria through the wormhole by ExplositionRooster5
Well I'm back. And on a Friday too (which, according to my stats is when I post most of my work). anyways, this is Maria,with a slight change in her looks. This is because this was made AFTER I went to Sakura-Con up here in Seattle and I got a commission of one of my characters.
However, the artist that did it took some... artist liberties with it, which impressed me so much, that I choose to change up her look a little. An interesting byproduct is that this drawing looks very much like a tattoo.
Critique by MandieEllie Dec 11, 2012, 2:08:51 PM
What is Awesome~!
You did an excellent job on the candy skull. Very well done. I like how the hair and clothes flow together, the folds in the clothes are very well done. It is an interesting character design. i really like the flower in her hair.

Your anatomy and foreshortening seems a bit off. This pose in particular can be hard to do. You have a good grasp on it, just work on it a bit more. it is hard to find the difference between the dress and the worm hole sometimes. I had to stare at it for a bit before I could see the difference.

Good Job~! :)
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The good: The perspective on the torso is very nice, and this is another creative concept! The outfit design again, is quite outstanding!

The improvements: The anatomy on this artwork could use a bit of practice. The arms appear slightly short, the foot you can see is oddly positioned, the breasts appear to be a little bit too high on the chest (generally the nipple will align with the middle of the upper arm, and the elbow willalign with the natural waist) Another thing I see which looks slightly strange is the hair. the hair behind the character looks really good, however the hair over her face and body is transparent, and it bothers me a little bit.

Things I would love to see:
Color, again would lookoutstanding on this artwork.

This was a really good try, and I would love to see you try this again in the future! I really hope that I do not seem too harsh.
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ms-laika Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013   Traditional Artist
I think most of the thing you could improve about this have already been said: Some major anatomy flaws but that just comes with experience, I guess. What I really like is the perspective! and how one of her legs disappers IN her skirt - that's a really nice concept and pretty to look at.
DragonScarf Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, she is kinda cool!
ExplositionRooster5 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why thank you!
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