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Maria through the wormhole by ExplositionRooster5 Maria through the wormhole by ExplositionRooster5
Well I'm back. And on a Friday too (which, according to my stats is when I post most of my work). anyways, this is Maria,with a slight change in her looks. This is because this was made AFTER I went to Sakura-Con up here in Seattle and I got a commission of one of my characters.
However, the artist that did it took some... artist liberties with it, which impressed me so much, that I choose to change up her look a little. An interesting byproduct is that this drawing looks very much like a tattoo.
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What is Awesome~!
You did an excellent job on the candy skull. Very well done. I like how the hair and clothes flow together, the folds in the clothes are very well done. It is an interesting character design. i really like the flower in her hair.

Suggestions:
Your anatomy and foreshortening seems a bit off. This pose in particular can be hard to do. You have a good grasp on it, just work on it a bit more. it is hard to find the difference between the dress and the worm hole sometimes. I had to stare at it for a bit before I could see the difference.

Good Job~! :)
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The good: The perspective on the torso is very nice, and this is another creative concept! The outfit design again, is quite outstanding!

The improvements: The anatomy on this artwork could use a bit of practice. The arms appear slightly short, the foot you can see is oddly positioned, the breasts appear to be a little bit too high on the chest (generally the nipple will align with the middle of the upper arm, and the elbow willalign with the natural waist) Another thing I see which looks slightly strange is the hair. the hair behind the character looks really good, however the hair over her face and body is transparent, and it bothers me a little bit.

Things I would love to see:
Color, again would lookoutstanding on this artwork.

This was a really good try, and I would love to see you try this again in the future! I really hope that I do not seem too harsh.
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ms-laika Jan 18, 2013   Traditional Artist
I think most of the thing you could improve about this have already been said: Some major anatomy flaws but that just comes with experience, I guess. What I really like is the perspective! and how one of her legs disappers IN her skirt - that's a really nice concept and pretty to look at.
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DragonScarf Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, she is kinda cool!
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ExplositionRooster5 Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why thank you!
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