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The Clown Smiles Again

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Well, here we are again after another week with an event that I hope becomes standard: The Friday update.

This beaut with the massive knockers was actually made before, back when I had just started with a deviantART account, as seen here: [link]

As you can see, I've made some clear improvements in perspective and the general skills as well as my equipment has improved as well. No name and story here, just enjoy the body.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The good:
The pose is really creative, and your unique concepts shine through yet again! I especially like the way the shorts are drawn, and the lock pendant..

The improvements:
Her head is a little bit large, and her body is rather small compared to her arms. Her breasts are also oddly positioned, and I can only imagine an unpadded sheer lace bra allowing the nipples to protrude.

What could make this better:
A background could help to shake away some of the awkwardness of the arms and the bazooka/rocketlauncher. Color can also improve anything!

Thank you very much and enjoy your day!